Monday, 20 September 2010

Essay 1 feedback

Low level 3 - roughly a C grade

Points chosen well to adapt to the question. Sensible, mostly clear balance of theory and texts. Clear argument developed in response to question. History and future discussed with relevance. Some errors which I can't mark out because it's on the blog. One in particular about Fiske syaing people should not be influenced by the media - I don't think he said that. He argues that people are not that easily influenced by the media. This is also a key point you miss - Adorno (Passive) Fiske (Active) + the revolution that never happened (Karl Marx). Make changes please.

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